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:heart:2009 Academy Fantasy 02 - Aerith and Tifa

:damphyr: great idea suggested by :iconnaoko-chan-ninjaoc: to draw Aerith and Tifa at Shinra Academy as well~

:damphyr: As for their age...

Zack = 18
Cloud = 16
Aerith = 17
Tifa = 15

:damphyr: After class...

Tifa: Aerith-san, are you meeting up with Zack senpai?

Aerith: Teehee, yes~ :love: What about you Tifa-chan?

Tifa: I'm gonna look for Cloud-kun~ :heart:


:damphyr: btw, Tifa's hair is not tied and down to her waist when she's 15~

:damphyr: compared with Cloud from the last drawing, I think these too look a bit too old... or did I draw Cloud too young... Orz...

:damphyr: Academy Fantasy - Zack and Cloud

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First of all, I absolutely love the concept of this series that you have started. The backgrounds are clear and gorgeous, I also love the idea of school uniforms, the colors contrast perfectly.

I have to say, Aerith/Aeris' hair is utterly amazing. It looks so real! The way it flows back and curves is so great.

The coloring is amazing as well. Even for art done with the computer, I know it is hard to make it look so natural and you did such a spectacular job. Even down to the highlighting in the eyes! Wow!

I also think that Aerith/Aeris' right hand could be grasping the book a little tighter. Her fingers make it look like the book could slip away at any time. The arms are positioned perfectly and the their fingers look extremely correct, but the way they fold in relation to the book could the changed.

Tifa's hips could be a bit wider. I know that she has a rather large chest, but I think that they should be a bit more proportional to the hips in that way.

I love the creases in the school uniforms, they look so natural and flow well with the picture, but I think that both of their skirts (Tifa's in particular) look a bit short. I'm not sure if its the way that it flips out on the sides, but maybe if you made her hips a bit bigger so you could really see where they were, I the viewer's eyes wouldn't think that her crotch is right at the skirt hem line.

Anyway, those are all super picky things. One last uuuuuber picky thing that isn't really a problem but I just felt like mentioning it as long as I'm going all out : Aeris/Aerith's bangs seem a bit flat compared to the rest of the piece that is so 3D They may just need a little darker undertones in the flippy uppy part (if that made sense >.>;)

I love the picture. I hope I covered everything ^3^ I'm not as amazing as you, so much of this comes as someone who looks up to your art XD Please continue the series~!!! I love it!
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:iconmirocka:
Ah, this is totally cuute
I love your shading XD

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Will there be + academy fantasy 03 + ? sephiroth in a school uniform ;p
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aw if ffvii really was like this I'd be super happy^_^

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Great idea ^-^
Really cute :D

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:iconchibiasta:
haha there will me more coming~ i dunno about sephiroth in a school uniform though lol... he's older than the rest of the crew, so most likely he'll be a teacher~ maybe a flashback / photo with him in school uniform XDDDD lol... good idea, good idea XDDDD

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:iconfuturevoiceactor:
Woo, I love this types of drawings, where Aerith and Tifa can talk peacefully! xD

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Holly Molly .... Soon you'll draw all FF7 characters in school getup. ~~ :heart::love:
Are the Turks gonna be on the list? (Specially those from Before Crisis .... X__x )

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