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I have to say, Aerith/Aeris' hair is utterly amazing. It looks so real! The way it flows back and curves is so great.
The coloring is amazing as well. Even for art done with the computer, I know it is hard to make it look so natural and you did such a spectacular job. Even down to the highlighting in the eyes! Wow!
I also think that Aerith/Aeris' right hand could be grasping the book a little tighter. Her fingers make it look like the book could slip away at any time. The arms are positioned perfectly and the their fingers look extremely correct, but the way they fold in relation to the book could the changed.
Tifa's hips could be a bit wider. I know that she has a rather large chest, but I think that they should be a bit more proportional to the hips in that way.
I love the creases in the school uniforms, they look so natural and flow well with the picture, but I think that both of their skirts (Tifa's in particular) look a bit short. I'm not sure if its the way that it flips out on the sides, but maybe if you made her hips a bit bigger so you could really see where they were, I the viewer's eyes wouldn't think that her crotch is right at the skirt hem line.
Anyway, those are all super picky things. One last uuuuuber picky thing that isn't really a problem but I just felt like mentioning it as long as I'm going all out : Aeris/Aerith's bangs seem a bit flat compared to the rest of the piece that is so 3D They may just need a little darker undertones in the flippy uppy part (if that made sense >.>
I love the picture. I hope I covered everything ^3^ I'm not as amazing as you, so much of this comes as someone who looks up to your art XD Please continue the series~!!! I love it!
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